head above the water from Katie Faint on Vimeo.
This is a link to the first draft of my music video. I have posted it on Vimeo and I have asked my peers and focus group to watch it and comment on what they think about it. This feed back will help me to see what I need to change and what my focus group like.
In this first draft of my video I have used many different shots from my four different locations and I am very pleased with the way that the footage has come out. I am glad that I listened to advice to film more footage than I may have initially thought I needed as I do not think that I need to go back and re-film and I have many different camera angels that I can use.
I think that the narrative of the video may need to be made a bit stronger by moving some footage around. As well as this I need to see what my target audience think of my video and how they think that I could be improved but overall I am pleased with my first draft and the quality of my footage.
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These are some mock ups of a front and back cover that I have made in photoshop. I created the marble effect from dropping some blue ... -
Below is some feedback from my target audience on my first draft of my music video. The first comment is from the video that I posted on Vim...
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